From 4ccfda65e70848cdd9f85b97ad7986d77b161a2f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Miika Turkia Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2016 08:53:09 +0300 Subject: [PATCH] Tuning the mobile-manual Signed-off-by: Miika Turkia Signed-off-by: Dirk Hohndel --- Documentation/mobile-manual.txt | 15 ++++++++------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/mobile-manual.txt b/Documentation/mobile-manual.txt index 3eb0c6bd5..2e2327ea5 100644 --- a/Documentation/mobile-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/mobile-manual.txt @@ -36,14 +36,14 @@ tool for viewing or sharing dive information at dive sites where a larger computer is not useful. _Subsurface-mobile_ also allows the gathering of GPS locations where dives are performed. -Because of the limitations of iOS, _Subsurface-mobile_ for iOS does not have +Because of the restrictions of iOS, _Subsurface-mobile_ for iOS does not have all the features of the same app for Android. While _Subsurface-mobile_ allows one to enter and save dive information using an Android device, users of _Subsurface-mobile_ typically use the -mobile app as an extension of the laptop/desktop version of _Subsurface_. -This allows the storage of dive logs on the Internet and which -can be shared by the Android version as well as the desktop version. +mobile app as an extension to the laptop/desktop version of _Subsurface_. +This allows the storage of dive logs on the Internet sharing them +between the Android and the desktop versions. While the desktop version of _Subsurface_ shows much more detailed information for each dive, the mobile version allows a more accessible dive log on a dive trip, useful for proving dive experience to dive shops or to review @@ -95,7 +95,8 @@ provide a PIN for access to the _Subsurface Cloud_, obtained in one of two ways: Open the desktop version of _Subsurface_ and click _File -> Preferences -> Network_, explained in detail in the -user manual for the _Subsurface_ desktop version. Once the account has +https://subsurface-divelog.org/documentation/subsurface-4-user-manual/#\_create_a_cloud_storage_account[user +manual for the _Subsurface_ desktop version]. Once the account has been created and verified using the desktop version, _Subsurface_ desktop alows one to download dive information from dive computers and store this on the cloud which can, in turn, be downloaded to _Subsurface-mobile_. _Subsurface-mobile_ @@ -118,7 +119,7 @@ image::mobile-images/Credentials.jpg["FIGURE: Mobile landing screen",align="cent ==== Using _Subsurface-mobile_: 1) Enter an e-mail address and a password in the fields indicated on the screen. -The password should be in lower case and the password should contain a combination of +The e-mail should be in lower case and the password should contain a combination of letters from the alphabet (upper and lower case) and/or numbers. When entering a password, it is possible to check a checkbox that enables the text of the password to be shown (image on left, above). At this stage, the red message "Cannot connect to cloud storage" appears on the screen. @@ -190,7 +191,7 @@ Using the Action Bar, it is also possible to delete the dive (tap the dustbin on the Action Bar) or to view the dive location on a map viewer (normally Google Maps; tap the GPS icon on the Action Bar.). -== Editing dive details. +== Editing dive details At the bottom of the dive details screen the _Action Button_ contains a pencil (image on right, above). Tapping the button brings up a panel with edit boxes that allows one to